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If you take just one minute
Every day
That is three hundred and sixty five minutes a year.
That's a little more
Than six hours a year.

Six hours
Every year.

Six more hours
I could've spent
Talking to you
Thanking you
Encouraging you
Letting you know
Just how much you meant.

One minute a day.

I promise you,
In memory of you,
Because of you,
I will spend
At least one miute a day
Reminding people how much I love them.

You always did that for me.

I wish I had remembered to take
One minute each day
To talk to you.
Or just talked to you
For one minute longer.

That's six hours I'll never get back.

I'll make sure to make
The rest of my six hours
Count.
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Fragthewinterbrew Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very interesting, it's as if the words were just pouring out on the spot. An impromptu expression, it's so natural yet meaningful.
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dagget0 Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
this is freaking amazing. i hope when i kill myself someone feels this way about me .
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AliveLove Apr 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
For this reason, please, please never kill you self.
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dagget0 Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
sorry cant make any promises
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AliveLove Apr 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
One of my best friends committed suicide a week ago, sparking this. I promise, it isn't the right way. If for no other reason than the fact that it's left all of his friends wrecked. And it would do the same to yours.
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JamieMaguire Apr 25, 2013  Student Writer
Very emotive, thought provoking, and rather melancholy piece of poetry. I'm am both pleased, and saddened, that it was written.
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Valkaneer Apr 25, 2013  Professional Writer
I don't know if I feel encouraged by this, or if I feel super depressed.

Seems like only a few folk today can even have a thought like this, and maybe love is all that's important when you have substance.

The rest are out for money rich or poor and have no time for emotions.
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JamieMaguire Apr 25, 2013  Student Writer
I hear you ...
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absent-dreams Apr 25, 2013   General Artist
I love this(:
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